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Visigoth · Guest Member #

Agh I cannot get the teeth right on this pic...They're looking pretty dumb... -- Unfortunately I haven't had much time to work on it since I've been so busy with work...But I'd appreciate any criticism...

Thanks guys....

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http://www.darksites.com/souls/goth/visigothan/portrait3v2.jpg

-- Hmm looks like that link even w/the [IMG] tags doesn't work... =\ http://www.darksites.com/souls/goth/visigothan

[This message has been edited by Visigoth (edited February 27, 2000).]

DuKEZ · Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2000 12:48 am

yer link dont work either

Visigoth · Guest Member #

Yeah I just checked that out and talked to the webmaster where I'm hosted =\ The webserver prevents direct image linking (!) SONOFA -- anyway -- I guess all I can do now, is link to my page, and not image files... ={

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proximo · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 467

well man as far as the teeth go ,, what would do is make them whiter .. i think what is looking odd now is you have this awsoem chick with gray theeth

no too apealing , and dont make the lines between teeth so visable just make it softer .. other wise she looks like shes got gaps

ok that all from me

Visigoth · Guest Member #

Hahah gaps =D Yeah, that's why a bunch of people said she looked buck toothed -- I'm going to try lighening the whole inside of her mouth, including what little of her gums you can see, and doing it all in light grays...Thanks for the suggestions

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Affected · Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2000 2:59 am

How'd you actually see the image? I can't seem to find any way to do so... How about linking to it off your page? Or am I blind, and there is already a link?

Visigoth · Guest Member #

I tried posting a UBB code link to insert the image; Turns out the webserver I'm on doesn't accept direct links to images; Only referral links from HTML's stored on the server. ie; I can't directly link the image...Only a link to my site and then say it's posted on the main page... =\ Sorry for the inconvenience... ={

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Nocturnal · member Member # Joined: 24 Oct 1999 Posts: 97

I liked her better without the teeth... But if i were to put teeth on her... i'd go with fangs. She looks like she could be a sucker .. " if ya know what i mean" =)
heh

-Nocturnal

Visigoth · Guest Member #

Hehe yeah I am working on a couple different versions of it...One with no teeth, another with a closed mouth, and a third with some nice pointy teef =[~

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P.S. Thanks for all your suggestions guys

Affected · Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2000 12:15 am

It's the one on the main page, right?

Um.. The thing is the face has no shading, really, so making the teeth fit will require some thinking...

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ustorfixx · Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2000 12:28 am

Dude, just go take a picture of your teeth and just look at how they look...the point isn't to make her teeth look like yours but to make them look like teeth in general. I think it would help alot.

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SightX · Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2000 8:51 pm

Hi Visigoth, I was looking at the picture and somthing struck me. Take the picture and cut it off at the neck...only look at the head from the chin up....it looks like she is looking slightly to the left, kina looking over her left sholder. You have her drawn standing straight towrds you....arrgg, does this make sence? I know what I want to say but I don't think its comming out right...anyways. Good work though

Visigoth · Guest Member #

Yeah...haha...She has her torso at an odd angle the way I sketched it out, so I am going to fix that

Thanks for the comments

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