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BooMSticK
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2000 3:21 pm     Reply with quote
Hi, Well as promised here is one of my newer paintings.

Hope you like it, and if you don't please leave a comment why... thanx
http://www.danbbs.dk/~pvillum/doodles/yellowstar.jpg

until later,

Boomer

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nicole
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2000 3:30 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, that's great, I love it. Very good

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Giant Hamster
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2000 3:49 pm     Reply with quote
other than the blue part and the wobbly cheek. she looks like someone i know! =) just she has dark red bangs.

im in a picky mood, so im going to pick on you
cool pic, but her nose seems a bit too tilted and the wobbly cheek. her right arm seems a straight on the inside and and has too much of a "wooden arm posture" look. if you were to give her more of a thingy curving from her arm to her armpit it would fit better =)

and to fix the wood arm give her a bit of a curve on her inner arm. there is no light on the outside of her left boob, it looks like construction paper without a small ) type highlight.

i like the pic. keep working at it! =)

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Joachim
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 18, 2000 2:33 am     Reply with quote
I like it !

I don't think you need to fix much to make it seem more correct. It looks a bit like that kind of rough style Dave McKeen (think that's his name ?!?) has on his covers, very nice !
Maybe you could just straighten up the nose a bit and make the hair a little more "sexy" in a way. Except for that I think it's great.
Nice breasts btw, hehe

Joachim
web: http://home.sol.no/~jbarrum/

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 18, 2000 7:16 am     Reply with quote
i like it, cept i don't understand the purpose of the yellow star,.
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BooMSticK
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 18, 2000 3:59 pm     Reply with quote
Thanx guys.

I just fixed it up a bit. new version can be found here...
http://www.danbbs.dk/~pvillum/doodles/yellowstar2.jpg

...so is this better?

until later,

;B
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Darkmoon
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2000 5:10 am     Reply with quote
wow, love the eyes.... blue skin... looks soft... nice pretty....

i like the way you painted the textures

great!



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Ko
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2000 5:49 am     Reply with quote
Wow... great style

I really like the "oilpaint" look
I have tried to keep this style
in a few pics but always end up
smoothing/shading the pic so that
it looks more airbrush like...
I wish I could stop doing that
just ONCE!....

Ko
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