[4s]

been here for half an hour..
i'm pretty newbie-ish to digital art, but i'm glad i found a messageboard about it
well, my digital sillz are not as good as some of youz but i'll get betta:
this is my real first all digital, all aribrushed all mouse drawing: (yeah I know the nose is big, and i chickened out of color too, it started out as a sketch)


btw, i thik this board neess a 'thubs up' icon thingy

[This message has been edited by 4s (edited January 24, 2000).]

[CeRbErO]

Sorry, but is this supposed to be a human? The eyes are too small, and the face looks stretched. And the forehead is too low.

Like the lightning and the smudgy style tho.

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[Funfetus]

I like the dimensions of the face -- nicely stylized. Kinda rat-like. The problem I see is that it suffers from the same fate as a lot of stuff I see on this board -- that of looking like a squished marshmallow, without any real hard angles. I see this a lot with beginning 3d modelers, too.

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Funfetus
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http://www.funhousedigital.com

[B]

i like it,.. it looks as if you're getting a birds eye view,. if you think of yourself my height 6'5", and you're looking at this guy 5'10" then it looks like all the other people i pass on the road,. therefore looking perfect <almost> maybe if i were holding flashligghts at different angles

b



[This message has been edited by B (edited January 24, 2000).]

[4s]

cool, thanks for the comments.
didn't realize it needed harder edges until now, but i see what you mean.
CeRbErO, it's not a human, its an alien with small eyes hehe, thanks for being blunt. that's how we learn sometimes.

[DarkpathImages]

I think that's a great job 4s, love the hair, look's almost real, and the sinister look in the eye's. The face could get sharpened up some more like the hair, maybe think about the light sourcing so you can put in some heavier shadow's, that'll make it look more solid, but all in all a great job for being new to this stuff

cos