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osk · Posted: Thu Dec 30, 1999 6:33 pm

These are some of my recent stuff .. I did them for no particular reason .. i had to keep them low resolution for the web but the actual files are about 16 to 18mb .. these are about 100 to 200kb ..sorry about the loading time but it will be worth it ..
i guess .. I am pretty proud of them and hope to improve my self to the level of Dhabih one day .. he really inspires me with his work ....

I will appreciate any feedback and coments so please feel free ..

here they are :
THIS is a much improved version of the original AKAEL .. please click here http://www.wendle.net/osk/akaelsit.jpg

and AKAEL_Metal ..please click here: http://www.wendle.net/osk/fallenaka.jpg

please tell me what you think

chrisk82 · member Member # Joined: 16 Jan 2000 Posts: 91 Location: CO

Hey, that's some damn cool stuff! Very good work. I like both of them very very much - some of the best work I've seen in these forums.

osk · Posted: Thu Dec 30, 1999 7:00 pm

Hey thanks Chris .. appreciated it ... anyone else?

DuKEZ · Posted: Thu Dec 30, 1999 8:23 pm

i like the 2nd pic more.. the first one he could use a mouth.. but its really good

looks hellish

Affected · Posted: Fri Dec 31, 1999 2:05 am

yeah, I like 'em. I think the red cloth in the second image could use some touching up, as it's a bit blurry, but other than that, they both look very good.

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Jessica Tobine · Guest Member #

the second almost exactly describes how I feel tonight. A hole in the chest, where the heart is supposed to be.

I like them, they're great. I can't to mechanical things. I do fucked up shit with eyes popping out of heads or melting people... But then again, I'm disturbed, so that's ok

Jessica Tobine · Guest Member #

Oh yeah, and I like that the first guy doesn't have a mouth. It adds to the intense look on his face. He's warning you with his eyes not to fuck with him or he'll burn you. The throne suggests he is almighty, and is somewhat intimidating. Excellent work.

He scares me.

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what a nightmare... am I sleeping?

imdaking · Posted: Fri Dec 31, 1999 1:04 pm

pretty slick man,

i like the second one a lil better...
and then the red thing is suppose to be like a loine cloth?!? thats what I think, very cool... keep it up

Giant Hamster · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 1782

from my "odd" perspective:

your characters are a bit too happy, add some brown and red smudges on them and make the shadows more centered to give it that "looming" look(if you want evil).

the first one is cool, other than he reminds me of quasi-moto with his big forehead.

the second one needs work on the cloth otherwise he looks like he is trying to give birth! and i dont think he is, so ummm, change it a bit

thats what i see, otherwise, good work and keep working.

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Optical · Posted: Fri Dec 31, 1999 6:08 pm

is the first one dimitri from darkstalkers/nightwarriors or whatever?

Anthony J · Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2000 12:24 am

disturbed jessica? aren't we all

as for the second pic, i'd have to say that
the red stuff doesn't look like a cloak at all...it looks like some red goo pouring out of the guys body. I think that needs some fixing. As for the first pic, it resembles the way spawn looks in hell alot...but perhaps that's how your character is, i dunno, i've never seen your Akeal pics before, so i'm just sayin what's on my mind

oh...and try going for some more realism on the armour !

Hope this helps ya out somewhat

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osk · Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2000 6:29 pm

Hey guys thanks for all the feedback .. about the red cloth .. hmmm... i really never saw it as anything else other than just "that red cloth hanging from his belt .. but now that you mentioned it I guess i could have made it a little bit different .. hmm it does look kinda thick .. i dont know about it looking like he is giving birth though ...well i dont think i am going to change it instead I'll keep thi in mind for the next one i do ... HEY ANOTHER THING <><>> did you guys see that the SECOND ONE .. "AKAEL METAL got POSTED AS PIC OF THE DAY >> ON http://www.3dpalette.com check it out .. !

n8 · Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2000 4:40 am

heeps good....theyed work reel well graffitied on a wall >=P
hehehe...keep up de good stuff