[osk]

Ok people this is one of my early works .. I think my second or thir rendering .. I am working on a new website where I can POST newer stuff BUT tell me what you think about this one ..


[This message has been edited by osk (edited December 30, 1999).]

[imdaking]

Rather low quality pic... but .. some of the muscles look a little tooo scuplted ... the abs I think... also the charecter.. I would think would look better with a mask that was blue too... Something that is like... enveloping his head, sucking him up, because thats kinda what it looks like to me that the costume is doing, but other than that, I think its pretty good, aside from being low quality.... =*( Keep crackin

[Freddio!]

Hey don't knock it it looks pretty good. I tend to disaggree about the muscles Maby he just has huge abs?

[jasonN]

It's a good picture, you have a lot of detail in there which is good.

But I think all that detail (the slime stuff) has detracted from some of the required basic elements of the pic.

For example: he looks a little 'flat', like a cardboard cutout. You have shading on each of the muscles which is great, but you need to have more general shading to convey the depth of the character as a whole body. This also goes for the head which looks a little flat.

Oh and please don't take this reply the wrong way, I am just trying to suggest ways in which you could improve the pic. But you have paid a lot of attention to detail and highlights which is great!

Hope it helps

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-Jason :)

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[DuKEZ]

agreed.. nice picture.. but his head is kinda off to me.. the detail is excellent in the top hand.. but the other (bottom) hand could use work defining.

his body position looks kinda twisted too.. but good pic

1/2 outa 5

[n8]

hmm...is that supposed to be venom??
hehhehe....just a thought that popped into me hed =)....keep goin..