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StewartStudio
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http://www.stewartstudio.com/toon1.htm
This is a cartoon image that I just finished working on in photoshop. My work is usually more realistic, but I thought I would make this image for dangergirl and see if I can get a little traffic from it.
What would make this image better?
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osk
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 1999 10:25 am |
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| iS GOOD .. but i think more realistic is better .. I think you would need to soften it up . soften the color up so it look like skin .. and I would add a light source that way you can have some contrasting shadows .. |
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Shrimpish
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 1999 3:00 pm |
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Is that water on her?
It doesn't look like water to me. |
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chrisk82
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 1999 4:36 pm |
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| Well, the face looks like china from WWF wrestling - pretty scary. I really like the form though, you seem to have a good knack for that. The water looks like cum, make it blue, unless you like the cum effect. Try using the blur tool all over your highlights and shadows to make it less detailed. Then your pic will be really good, instead of just good - which is very good, understand? Good! |
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Peon
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 1999 5:44 pm |
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ewwhha...realistic artists just can't do good simple\cartoon like pics. Otherwise its good...just the face looks a tad unusal.
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Funfetus
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 1999 5:56 pm |
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I beg to differ.  I'm mostly a "realistic" artist, but I think I can do pretty good "cartoon" stuff. i wish I had some to show right now, though. :P
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StewartStudio
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 1999 8:59 pm |
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http://www.stewartstudio.com/toon1.htm
Thank you for the suggestions. I removed the water from the image and made her jaw not as wide. I also added some highlights to her shorts and blurred some of the highlights.
I do not have a tablet, but I used one in college for a class I took on painter. I will have to get one very soon. I am not completely satisfied with this illustration. I am going to do another one that is more realistic. I can do cartoon images, but I do have to force myself not to zoom in and go crazy with the details.
It takes 2 artists to create a masterpiece, one to do all the work and the other one to tell him when to STOP! Thank you for being the other artist.
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jasonN
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 1999 9:50 pm |
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The body and form is well done, but her face is a bit 'mannish'.
Just try to make her more feminine and the eyes are a bit out of alignment, i think...
Anyways, the body is good!
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