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Sanders
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 Posted: Thu Dec 23, 1999 9:44 pm |
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This is my very first *completed* digital image. ALL critisizm accepted -but please, refrain from bashing.
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[Shizo]
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| Posted: Thu Dec 23, 1999 10:25 pm |
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my critism as follows: make it .... MAKE I% MORE #D HAARAAAAKAKAKAKAKAK#^#*@#^@(@&
mmmkay?
lets try some more highlights and shadows shall we? heheheeh
/me talking like a r33l pro, mmmmmmmmmmkaaaayyyyyy?
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DuKEZ
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| Posted: Thu Dec 23, 1999 10:25 pm |
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i like bio-tech kinda images like that 
thats pretty good man.. all the details wit the mechanic mess, wires and all.. u kept em seperated and i can follow em.. (not just a mesh).. cool
altho im not that excited about the background |
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jfraker
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| Posted: Thu Dec 23, 1999 11:15 pm |
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| I think that the picture is awsome but the file size is a bit on the large size. Other than it taking a long time to download it very good. |
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Oscar Alexander
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| Posted: Thu Dec 23, 1999 11:58 pm |
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Cool! Nice design! Could have been "Ghost in the Shell" artwork 
Keep up the good work! |
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Optical
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| Posted: Thu Dec 23, 1999 11:59 pm |
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| very nice, looks like geoff darrow's style. (can't remember if thats the spelling) |
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Funfetus
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| Posted: Fri Dec 24, 1999 12:18 am |
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I REALLY dig the drawing. Very nice stuff -- solid drafting and nice detail.
The shading, however, seems rather half-assed. If you're going to do soft shading, I think it needs to have more contrast to give it the illusion of form. It might look good with flat 2 or 3 color shading, though.
Can't wait to see more!
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ilmi
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| Posted: Fri Dec 24, 1999 12:55 am |
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| kinda like morbid techno stuff.. love it..were inspired by that ghost in the shell movie? the background color n dripping effect is cool.. but i think u can take off that jumbo sized digits.. or make it less obvious.. just a suggestion |
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Jessica Tobine
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| Posted: Fri Dec 24, 1999 4:55 am |
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I like it, I'm too tierd to critique or what ever...... zzzzz....
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cecil
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| Posted: Fri Dec 24, 1999 5:53 am |
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| I like it, the detail is really great. Like someone else mentiones, I don't like the background either. |
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n8
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| Posted: Fri Dec 24, 1999 6:04 am |
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| sweeet....i kinda dig the numbers...nybody know pooter language to tell us wot it sez??..hehe |
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Sanders
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| Posted: Fri Dec 24, 1999 6:56 am |
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| Thanks for the comments. I do really like Ghost in the Shell (and all Masamune Shiro work for that matter -especially Akira) but my original design was inspired by some old 'Prophet' work by Stephen Platt. I know the background is sub-par, but it was also last minute finalizing. I thought it would look better than a plain black back-drop. I hope to make finish/create more digital works over the Christmas vacation. |
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Funfetus
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| Posted: Fri Dec 24, 1999 2:29 pm |
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Hate to nitpick, but Akira was by Katsuhiro Otomo.
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 1999 7:37 am |
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| the style reminds me of lobo/type comics,. but it needs a lil more of a sketchy feel for that,. this image is too pure and defined,. scre it up a lilt, then i'll approve |
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