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Trance-R
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 1999 7:18 pm     Reply with quote
Well, I got really bored from school today, I whooped up this image in 2 hour time. Em... the best I have so far. Please give me some comments.
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Teahouse/3344/goodies/console3.jpg

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 12:53 am     Reply with quote
Hey, that pic is lookin realy nice

But there's one exception. The electricity.
It's not blurred enough and stands out too much.

And also, the colours in your pictures are much more gold/red orientated thus making the blue look a bit out of place. Perhaps you should have done the pic more blue/purple orientated. Or, try to dull the blue so it doesn't stand out too much, then highlight it with white so it still looks like lightening. Do u get me?

Maybe make the main colour of the lightening streak white with it gently mixing to a blue glow around it. Or something like that. Gee, I'm having a hard time explaining this. Sorry. Or you could just leave it as it is

But otherwise, I think it's a really great looking image, keep it up!
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 1:38 am     Reply with quote
Trance-R, kewl pic! I'm inclined to agree with what's been said tho about the electricity *immediately starts singing Something For Kate* ahem... anyway, one good one to do electricity is to choose a small brush, and then in the Paintbrush Options window, put a number value in the Fade box (prolly around 45 or so, but experiment with it), and make sure Fade to Transparent is selected. Have fun!

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Leo
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 4:04 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, electric lighting is sucks! Man, you need more work on it!
/Leo
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Nisse
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 6:38 am     Reply with quote
Good work, nice logo!
But as Leo pointed out you need to work some more whit the electric lightning, perhaps some white pixels.
That would be cool.



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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 10:47 am     Reply with quote
hey here's a tip for the lightning
place an extra layer behind the lightning layer and draw the lightning over with a white brush (not 100% transparancy). It creates a cool light effect



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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 3:58 pm     Reply with quote
I wonder how many round here have heard of Something for kate?
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Trance-R
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 8:08 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the feedback!
Eh. Hehe... I need to work on that lightning... Even though you guys have elaborated quite thoroughly on the subject, I still don't get it!! =(
Could someone pleeeease just take that jpg and tune it up for me? and certainly tell me how it's done? THanks!

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 8:44 pm     Reply with quote
HOHO!!!!.....its all poofy now!!...or something like that

http://www.geocities.com/SunsetStrip/Limo/4176/trance-r/console32.jpg

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Trance-R
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 1999 9:43 pm     Reply with quote
Hey Thanks! Didn't expect a response that quick. I like the touch up on the circle plate... but how did you do that lightning?
WOuld you care Xplain'n?


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 1999 4:04 am     Reply with quote
I Took your Lighning and:

1. selected its color and changed it to a bluer color.
2.took a 1 pixel brush and put some white lines on it to give it more bright spots..
3.then i took a small brushed blur tool and blurred it a bit.
4.grabbed the dodge tool and made more defined whites
5.grabbed the burn too and gave it some depth.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 1999 4:09 am     Reply with quote
I know Something for Kate! Actually, I don't listen to any of their songs. I just know of the band. Oh well
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Trance-R
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 1999 6:13 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, all that in 5 easy steps?
Photoshop has never been easier without Dhabih Eng's forum!

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 1999 9:50 pm     Reply with quote
Check out the laser tutorial at this site:
http://www.alexdg.com

If you add a little bit of static distortion you should get your desired results.



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 1999 10:20 pm     Reply with quote
Hey Dylon, thanks for that additional TIP!
I think I could do one that looks good enough now.
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