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Doc007
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What a cool fourm. Critque online.  Well, check out my Illustration page (all done with Photoshop and a Calcomp tablet. some of them like the Green Envy face and the Light house are some of the first things I drew with the tablet) http://members.xoom.com/Doc007/illus.htm
Some kinda suck some are better than others.
Coments are welcome.
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Anthony J
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| Posted: Wed Nov 17, 1999 10:00 pm |
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not sure if im the one to say or whateva,
but one problem, or thing people used to tell me most was...work harder on sharpening the edges...hard lines as shrimpish would put.
blurred images look too quickly done.
Because we're all knowledged photoshop users
here, we know that the blurred pics are the ones that were done with the paintbrush at a low rez. work more on zooming in and adding the little spices *the details* mate.
:P i am not australian
hehehe
and
youarenotapieceofsteak
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Recife
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| Posted: Thu Nov 18, 1999 1:34 pm |
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Hey. Nice pictures! some of them looks really blurry, but others are fine! Thats the tip I would try: dont blurry that much your pictures.Did you use a photo manipulation on Touch.jpg????
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Doc007
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| Posted: Thu Nov 18, 1999 2:04 pm |
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No, I used "The Creation of Adam" as refence for the hands,(it's at the top of my tablet. If you have a Calcomp Ultra Slate you'll know why) but didn't trace or minipulate anyhting. I drew it freehand with the tablet.
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SPike.CoM
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| Posted: Sun Nov 21, 1999 7:46 am |
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You might wanna practice a bit of symmetry to the faces... since some of them ('cept for Darth Maul) are out of symmetry.
And to fix the blur problem use a small/thin brush.
Other than that they are, in my humble opinion, way past cool!
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Doc007
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| Posted: Sun Nov 21, 1999 3:10 pm |
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Well the green Envy one is suposed to be kinda off. It's just suposed to be emotional, not anatomicaly accurate.
Maul is one of my latest, though Yoda is *THE* latest.
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ka0z
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| Posted: Sat Nov 27, 1999 1:11 am |
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| Great work. I especially loved the Yoda and DMaul pics. |
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Silico
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| Posted: Sat Nov 27, 1999 4:07 pm |
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| Your artwork is GREAT!! Well, yeah, i would have to agree with sharpening it up a bit... but other than that, i don't think much more can be done! Keep up the good work man you've got somethin going here.. |
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