[Funfetus]

I just put my new piece up at: http://www.funhousedigital.com/fb-knf.jpg

Please take a look and tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is welcome, but I'm sick of looking at it, so I probably won't want to change anything. It always helps for next time, though.....

Thanks.

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[B]

it reminds me of the simpsons,. the episode where homer becomes 3D and is in the real world,..a cartoon leaning on a wall,. and the Hair,. the Hair,. let me tell you about the hair,.,.. it's weird

all in all, nice form,. big feet, bad hair.. i give it a fruit roll-up

[FuzyTech]

GREAT PIC! only a few things to point out tho... Yes the hair needs to change, something more free flowing. I like the direction you took with it, but it stands out too much, maybe do away with the lighter grey and keep the darker portions. A lil' more stringy maybe...?

Right hang (her right), the thumb is like...wierd. needs to look like a thumb instead of a stub.

Only thing else, is that she stands out way too much! She doesn't look like she's apart of the picture. Less defined edges, blend a lil' more. Other than that, I luv the pic! Wish i could color that well...


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[Funfetus]

I've made a few changes now. Changed the hair, tried to blend the edges into the background a bit, but it's probably a lost cause.

The background was an experiment, and it didn't turn out as well as I'd hoped. Oh well. I'll know better next time.

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[Artic]

It's a great pic, but i think her knees are to thin, and her right shoulder too red. But, I don't know. It's what I think...

[Recife]

Hey man! Really nice picture! Here goes the comments:
1)Hair looks fake! You used a really big brush on it! (And Im pretty sure you can do much better than that from your previous pictures)
2)Her eyes are way too white! So it looks kinda unreal, put some more color on it! And I also didnt like the purple color kind in the eyes!
3)Her right leg, is way smaller than the left one, and you forgot to put the shadow on it!
4)Other than that it KICKS ASS! Especially her hands and clothes! Keep up the good work, and dont get too much lazy next time for making her hair!

[Affected]

Well, I like it. I have one question, though: What's her right hand doing? From the shadow it casts on the wall, it look slike it should be pressed against it, but it's not...

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[Shrimpish]

Hey, Brandon, AWESOME!!!

I love the smoothness of the body. It's phat.
The only thing that stands out is the right leg being a lot smaller than the left, and the knee should be bigger since it's closer to the viewer.
Oh, and the shadow on the right hand... The thumb should cast a shadow onto the wall.

Great work, man! Keep it up.

[Funfetus]

Made some more changes...
http://www.funhousedigital.com/fb-knf.jpg

Thanks for keeping me on my toes, guys. :P

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[Mongoose]

The right leg is no smaller than the left. It's a foreshortening technique, and I think Brandon has achieved it quite well.

I can see nothing wrong with this pic at all, except that girl kinda scares me :/

Mongoose

[FuzyTech]

I totally agree with it being an awesome picture, but the right knee is definately narrowing in too much. Doesn't look real. The hair looks a lot better then before, except the forehead looks a bit too light. As for meshing her into the background, it looks quite a bit better.

Maybe i'm just being too picky. If that's the case ignore me... It's a great image regardless.


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