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lantern
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:13 am     Reply with quote
Hi all, have been working on this piece off and on for a while and just finished it a couple of days ago. Thought I'd upload it.


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Lakka
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:25 am     Reply with quote
Looks cool. The sense of scale is great!

The earth in the shadow (the one between the pair and the solo act) feels like it pops up a bit too much when faced with the lighted ground. I think getting some contrast with having more&less detail between these two could make it even more dramatic. You've done something more like this with the foreground and the lighted area, and I like the vibe of it alot.
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Sumaleth
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 5:09 pm     Reply with quote
Nice pic.

The guy in shadow on the left isn't up to the same quality as the other two.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 11:15 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the feedback guys! Took the liberty of updating the image.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 1:04 pm     Reply with quote
This is fucking awesome. Love this as-is.
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Lakka
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:23 am     Reply with quote
Hi, it is even more dramatic now!

Also, the things you worked on definately made it read better, is RAD Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:51 am     Reply with quote
Tinusch, Lakka - Thanks guys! Great when constructive criticism can improve a piece Wink
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