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Loki
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It's finally done. Not entirely happy with it, but that painting was clogging my creative pipeline so it had to go - either way. Original is 3K. More details on my blog. Let me know what you think ... Thank you!
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SubJodge
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| Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:51 am |
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Great work Loki, i love the design of the ship and the work on the station  |
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Jabo
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| Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 7:36 am |
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I like it very much. The light is kinda cool, the contrast between the dark, artificially lit bay and the natural exterior, and the perspective shows how high in the sky this is. Not to sure about the ship design, but I guess that's a bit personal taste.
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| Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 11:06 am |
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| loKi> you have no idea how much in love with this painting i was on your blog. Glad you finally finished it, although I seemed to like one of the earlier versions. Awesome ship design- very very well executed. love it! |
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notic
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| Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 9:51 pm |
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| very good! maybe the composition could be better in the top, perhaps just cut a bit off? i dunno. other than that i really like it |
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jaylee
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Lakka
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 12:04 am |
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I actually like the design of the ship, added with the way "liftoff" happens with it, it really looks thought through.
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PirkkaH
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 2:12 am |
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Cool, this is nice. About composition or proportion. I would expand the canvas a bit from top and right, that the viewer can see where that ship is heading. Now if that aircraft takes off? It looks like it will get smashed to the edges of canvas, or when using imagination, there would be coming an enemy's aircraft, when it's immediately confronted by a threat. Anyway, this is nicely done and you have done very good work with textures and design.
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Hideyoshi
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 4:22 am |
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Ah, great stuff!
Sweet design on the jet plane and the lighting is great!
I agree, the only thing that could be improved is composition and framing. A stronger focal point could be established maybe...
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Gort
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 5:40 am |
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Great stuff indeed! Looks awesome Loki!
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| Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 3:47 am |
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Hey Loki, cool stuff! I love the sense of altitude
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