[grawind]

hey guys,please give me some advises.
i don't know how to go on drawing details ,
or should i just finish it in this step?

my english is poor,wish you can undstood me...

[Naeem]

hey grawind

i definitely like the design of the architecture. it's very unique/different. perhaps my favorite part is the structure holding the balls up. you do have a good sense of design.

only thing i would say is; don't copy/past the same ship over and over and scale it to different sizes; it may make your painting too... static?
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i also think you can work on your values/color variation. try some reds and hints of green even where you may not think that they belong there. anyhow, keep at it.


also, compositionally, the structure seems to be grazing the edge of the painting; creating a tangeny which is never really a good idea in any drawing/paionting. you might consider extending the image a little bit over.

[grawind]

annisahmad:
thank you very much !
i will try that.

i have already notice the edge grazing the left side.
in the beginning it dosen't touch against the left edge,
it's shape likes a shell,but after that i modified it into a ball.
maybe i should try the shell again,
but the center of gravity likely move to right.

change the canves size is a easy way .
i'll do that,
yet i will try more colors
everycar will be different ,if i have new ideas.

thanks very much

[waynebebay]

Reminds me of Mass Effect, love it.
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