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Sonia junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2007 Posts: 12
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:08 pm |
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My first post.
And it is a 5 hours speedpainting.
I draw it with photoshop.
Crits and feedback are welcomed.
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Last edited by Sonia on Thu Oct 18, 2007 12:00 pm; edited 9 times in total |
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FallDamage member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 2003 Posts: 474 Location: Canada
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 2:37 am |
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Everything looks great. Just one thing; to me at least, her awkwardly disappearing left hand kind of looks like a contrived avoidance of hand painting, unless you're implying something else, which is fine.
Great technique and use of color on everything that is in the picture though. |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 11:15 am |
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Personally I disagree with Falldamage about the hand.. I think it looks fine.. a little stiff maybe but with her leg being up like that the hand would naturally fall that way.
I really like the image... so far.. it feels a little unfinished. like you could tighten the edges up a bit. It almost seems like a blurry photo. Also, the background is mysterious. I have no idea whats going on around her.
The girl is very pretty and you've done a good job portraying her.
Overall I like the image but I think it needs some more work.
BTW: this is my 3000th post. YAY! |
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3nasty member
Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2005 Posts: 340 Location: myspace.com/halomoto
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:45 pm |
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5 h! 8-P ..nice shape! .. is this from the picture ? |
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Lakka member
Member # Joined: 27 Sep 2007 Posts: 811 Location: Espoo, Finland
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:50 pm |
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I'd love it if you'd spice the eyes up a bit and make th face abit sharper.
Looking good |
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Sonia junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2007 Posts: 12
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:39 pm |
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Thank you very much !
All of your feedbacks are precious. :)and would you tell me what is "8-P"? |
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Joe84 member
Member # Joined: 26 May 2004 Posts: 262
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:56 pm |
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i like the glow coming from her skin, like others have mentioned it needs tightening up as it looks generally blurry
also her eyes could use more dark and form, at the moment they are sort of flat |
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Sonia junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2007 Posts: 12
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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 6:17 am |
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Thanks Joe84 very much !
Sonia |
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