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Sonia
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:08 pm     Reply with quote
My first post.
And it is a 5 hours speedpainting.
I draw it with photoshop.
Crits and feedback are welcomed.
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FallDamage
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 2:37 am     Reply with quote
Everything looks great. Just one thing; to me at least, her awkwardly disappearing left hand kind of looks like a contrived avoidance of hand painting, unless you're implying something else, which is fine.

Great technique and use of color on everything that is in the picture though.
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 11:15 am     Reply with quote
Personally I disagree with Falldamage about the hand.. I think it looks fine.. a little stiff maybe but with her leg being up like that the hand would naturally fall that way.

I really like the image... so far.. it feels a little unfinished. like you could tighten the edges up a bit. It almost seems like a blurry photo. Also, the background is mysterious. I have no idea whats going on around her.

The girl is very pretty and you've done a good job portraying her.

Overall I like the image but I think it needs some more work.


BTW: this is my 3000th post. YAY!
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3nasty
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:45 pm     Reply with quote
5 h! 8-P ..nice shape! .. is this from the picture ?
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Lakka
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:50 pm     Reply with quote
I'd love it if you'd spice the eyes up a bit and make th face abit sharper.

Looking good Wink
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Sonia
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:39 pm     Reply with quote
Thank you very much !
All of your feedbacks are precious. :)and would you tell me what is "8-P"?
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Joe84
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:56 pm     Reply with quote
i like the glow coming from her skin, like others have mentioned it needs tightening up as it looks generally blurry
also her eyes could use more dark and form, at the moment they are sort of flat
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Sonia
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 6:17 am     Reply with quote
Thanks Joe84 very much !
Very Happy
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