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heatherisadork
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:01 am     Reply with quote
I'm still not sure if I should be posting my stuff here (bad experience from other places) but heres something I did a few days ago. Not really sure what the deal with it is. I know I messed the breast and hair up but I hope I can fix it up a bit. I'm just not sure how to so any critiques are great.



sorry it's blurry. It didn't fit on the scanner so I had to take a photo of it.
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:51 am     Reply with quote
Looks good to me actually. What bothers me is the hair on the left (her right) being so much thicker than on the other side. Also, her body is too wide, starting with her overly broad shoulders and all the way down to her overly wide torso. I like where it's going though.
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