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Samsonsreaper
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santa having some trouble..
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AAArgh ... Too busy I need a break ... 
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The Insane Lemur
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| Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 6:46 pm |
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nice start to the new page guys  heres some craptasicity to ruin it
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:01 am |
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Samson - awesome  |
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EAD
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 4:19 am |
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sweet page so far, I like em all.
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Justin Oaksford
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 8:17 pm |
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A little big.. =\
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 6:52 am |
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Great work guys, keep them coming!
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Justin Oaksford
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:28 am |
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I noticed a few things about your matte painting; The buildings have no perspective and are not seperate in any way from the back ground. You need to add more atmospheric perspective as well as some sort of physical perspective to seperate the FG and the BG.
As well, the water is very inconsistent, and why would there be waterfalls in an arctic zone? That just makes no sense- matte paintings need to be consistent and believable (thus their purpose), not just 'cool lookin'.
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XIA
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Justin Oaksford> Thanks for the feedback. I agree. ...it was not well thought out as it supposed to be. It wasn't meant to be a matte painting though, just some kinda doodle. I really have no idea what I am looking for sometimes. Still though, it was wayyyy off and no excuse for putting out crap.  Better luck next time, maybe. |
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kait
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:34 am |
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| its quite obvious doodle i think...it doestn mean that u dont know perspective or smthing. the place and mood for speedpainting are good enough...well done (but yea, Oaksford has some points there). |
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Justin Oaksford
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Sorry for the harsh crit- but writing it off as a doodle shouldn't be a fallback... I mean when we are still far from pro, sure, but pro's have all that stuff as second nature. It's part of their working process, they don't really have to go out of their way to fix it-
so if you (not YOU you, but you as in whoever is doing art) are truly dedicated to art, then you can't just write stuff off as "a sketch", because if it's wrong on a sketch it means you don't know it well enough.
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Here's something small from a quick painting session.
Great page guys! Amazing work from all of you!
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 1:39 pm |
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rainart Great, I love FG figure
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so much awesome stuff here...
Samsonreaper - man, u have really progressed great work...
some dailys... "Lost in a Sea of Dreams"
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The Insane Lemur
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:39 pm |
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ill second daw, too many awsome ones to mention...
going to Milan sat (first time to Europe) so dont know how my situation will be as far as painting
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:56 pm |
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| Justin Oaksford wrote: |
Sorry for the harsh crit- but writing it off as a doodle shouldn't be a fallback... I mean when we are still far from pro, sure, but pro's have all that stuff as second nature. It's part of their working process, they don't really have to go out of their way to fix it-
so if you (not YOU you, but you as in whoever is doing art) are truly dedicated to art, then you can't just write stuff off as "a sketch", because if it's wrong on a sketch it means you don't know it well enough. |
Xia was very receptive to your critique. I don't think his doodle comment was a fallback, it was a nice way of pointing out that his sketch isn't at all a matte painting.
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:41 pm |
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XIA: Nice enviro might be a little too linear and horizontal on the left side, I would like to see them more like those round buildings in the back.
EOL: dunno what that is but its very interesting, heh
Cicinimo: nice values on this one. Some creative beasts you got there too, good job.
A quick speedie from yesterday, had to salvage it from a PS crash >_<
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Justin Oaksford
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Actually I was responding to kait, "its quite obvious doodle i think...it doestn mean that u dont know perspective or somthing."
I am glad that he was receptive to it. I probably should have included a name to direct the critique better, my bad.
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kait
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| Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 1:24 am |
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yea...but still, its not a finished work forum, so no need to be so critic.
ups. it is tho  |
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| Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:13 am |
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Fantastic Work everyone!
Kudos to Hideyoshi, Mitsui, lingy-0, P-Rik, Jokinen and Cicinimo.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:55 am |
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no images to post, but just wanted to say i love this page!
Samsonsreaper: i found the image absolutely amazing, unfortunately, when i read the theme above it, i removed some of the poetry! haha
P-Rik: this one is spot on. great balance and tones!
rainart: chararainart! it's really great to see you give it a try.
Cicinimo; always humbled by the smartness of your lights and radiosity.
Naglfar: i'm blown away!
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| Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 2:48 pm |
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| Nag... that is seriously awesome!! |
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Hi everybody
Im lurking here for years now
so this is my first post here!
nice page so far
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everyone is looking good.
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:19 am |
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got kind of carried away on a brush test
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:01 am |
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hideyoshi, lingy-0, cicinimo, naglfar - awesome!
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