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Disco_Science junior member
Member # Joined: 28 May 2005 Posts: 46
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:52 am |
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This is a water city i've been working. Does anyone have suggestions on how to push this further? I'm kinda stuck.
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michalczyk junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Jun 2006 Posts: 22 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 12:54 pm |
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Looks like a good start. Once you have blocked out all the main stuff, you can start making things more detailed. Adding highlights, more structure, etc. You must have some kind of mental picture of the final work, right? So go there and take a look. _________________ Fantasy art, Sci-fi, Surreal, Space and Abstract art - check out my gallery! |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:08 pm |
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Looks like it needs some depth.. The sky is looking too flat against the foreground, probably because it's so dark and because those vertical brushstrokes are distracting... I did a quick paintover to open the image up a little, it should explain what I mean..
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Disco_Science junior member
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 3:14 pm |
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Ah thanks Tinusch=), I see what you mean. The lighter sky helps alot.
I'm gonna lighten up the sky like you did, then im gonna try and add some more detail to the mid/forground and try and render the water=). _________________ (|_|)
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