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Topic : ""Surf Agent" guitar tune" |
Francis member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1155 Location: San Diego, CA
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Gort member
Member # Joined: 09 Oct 2001 Posts: 1545 Location: Atlanta, GA
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 10:12 am |
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coolio - I like it. I dig surf music.  _________________ - Tom Carter
"You can't stop the waves but you can learn to surf" - Jack Kornfield |
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Misc member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 1:29 pm |
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nice and sweet |
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Max member
Member # Joined: 12 Aug 2002 Posts: 3210 Location: MIND
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 2:57 am |
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Awesome! I love it  |
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Lunatique member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 3303 Location: Lincoln, California
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:00 pm |
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How long have you been playing?
The riff that starts the song--you could vary it a bit every time it repeats, so it's slightly different each time--either the picking pattern, number of notes, slight variation in the notes...etc.
The song structure overall is a bit repetitive--could be structured better.
The bass can use more compression--the dynamic is kind of all over the place.
The playing is slightly sloppy--maybe tighten it with an audio editor?
The melodic development could be more dynamic--catchier. |
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[Shizo] member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:58 pm |
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I hate surfing, but this tune sounds alright  |
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Francis member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1155 Location: San Diego, CA
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:24 pm |
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Thanks guys!
Lunatique - I've been playing a long time, since the mid 80s. Before that I was a little kid playing violin. Thanks for the feedback on the tune - it might be a bit beyond the gear I am working with to do some of the stuff you mentioned.
shizo - haha, I've never been surfing. _________________ Francis Tsai
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