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PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 2:17 pm     Reply with quote
See realistic and highly symbolic art. This is a work of sequential art about the Devil tempting Yeshua in a desert, and then on top of the temple mount.

You will enter in Part I, "Bread in the Desert". At the botton of that page, there is a link to Part II, "Stone of the Temple".

http://home.windstream.net/themessiah
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 8:53 am     Reply with quote
are these photo-overpaints?
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 10:24 am     Reply with quote
NeFF wrote:
are these photo-overpaints?


No. Jesus and Satan were drawn with pencil, scanned into my computer, and then colored/painted in a photoshop type program.

To see an overview of the method, go to my blogspot. Your question will be better answered there, and you can also see some pencil work (click on the pictures and they enlarge).
www.temptthemessiah.blogspot.com

ALSO, some people may not be noticing that there is a second page, a part 2. Click at the bottom of the page to go see part 2.

PART 1 - http://home.windstream.net/themessiah
PART 2 - http://home.windstream.net/themessiah/part2.html
or you can access part 2 from bottom of part 1
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 5:34 pm     Reply with quote
Jesus beats the crawling girl-Satan with a stick and then she turns out to be a chick with dick and pisses on their barbeque? This actually proves that religious texts can be read anyway you like.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 5:55 pm     Reply with quote
What a funny interpretation of events. But I disagree with your conclusion.

The pictures are symbolic. Satan a woman = scriptures say he comes as an angel of light, to steal, kill, and destroy. Satan crawling = the curse placed on the once angelic being, in Genesis. Jesus hitting devil with staff = represents the authority of God and that God will honor His covenants with humanity and not discard them as Satan suggested. Pissing on the altar and extinguishing the fires that burned there = well, that is symbolic of many things, some of which may offend.

I let the scriptures and pictures preach, rather than me. If you don't get it, or just don't care to get it, then hopefully you can just enjoy the art. Some like it. Some don't. I respect all opinions, even those that criticize. In fact, I like the critical posts best....because I learn from them.

Thanks for your time and observations Freebooter. Don't you just hate it when a fallen angel urinates on your BBQ?
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 3:02 am     Reply with quote
I think what you've done here is great! The realism of the characters adds to the drama so much. It draws you in so much more than the usual 'cartoon people' do. Immersive, great work.

Also, the fantasy-style magic effects make a great combo with robes and ancient desert stuff.

It looks like you use photos to draw from. That's fine, people just like to know what they are looking at, that's all.

Crit-wise, I would suggest that representing superiority by hitting someone in the face with a pole is not a great message for people that are seeking moral guidance.


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 3:07 am     Reply with quote
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Don't you just hate it when a fallen angel urinates on your BBQ?



couldn't you have found any better symbol for it.. ? I wouldn't call myself an artist if that was the best I could come up with. It somewhat made the whole thing fall into some strange self parody.. and yes, I have read the scriptures and this little twist in your story doesn't quite fit.


Agreed also with Capt.Fred - whacking people in the face in such way is not really the way to go either.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 8:50 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, everyone knows sticks are for poking and not for whacking.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 2:45 pm     Reply with quote
"Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil; For You are with me; Your rod and your staff they comfort me." (Psalms 23:4)

Why is it a comfort? Because I am protected from evil - or the Evil One.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 2:55 pm     Reply with quote
I dont click on links... unless its porno links... Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:15 am     Reply with quote
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I dont click on links... unless its porno links... Very Happy



READ WHAT GLITTERBUG WROTE ABOVE. I think that comment is for you.

I don't know why I bothered to respond to that. Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 10:08 am     Reply with quote
RyanWalsh, now that's spam if there is any.

G.owen> I hope your not offended but for me it's difficult to take that religious art seriously if it's already made ridiculous by the author. I don't know if you're really a religious man, but you seem like one and that's why it strikes me as odd that you put in those silly Whack-effects and piss.

If religious art is presented with bad taste and humour it will be treated as such.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 7:50 am     Reply with quote
Offended. No. I want people to speak their mind.

Two different people can experience the same thing, yet reach two entirely different conclusions. One can say that it is �great�. Another can say that it is �with bad taste and humor�. Why is that? It depends on the person�s mind....what is on the inside of a person. What we say reveals what is inside of us. Unfortunately, many do not recognize this and so refuse to see the reflection that is revealed in their words and actions. This does not mean that one should be silent if they have an unfavorable view of the work. If they censor their thoughts, they lie to themselves and the world.

Truth be told, we all caste a bad reflection. This is why we need the Savior. I also caste a bad reflection...and when I show good, it is not me but the Christ in me.

The �whack�. The �pee�. These are symbolisms. People usually use words to explain their interpretations of the scriptures. I use pictures....symbols. It is art.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 5:15 pm     Reply with quote
Your symbols are being criticised.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 10:26 am     Reply with quote
Hi...

nice work!

But to reply about the question of overpainting... the link you posted doesn't prove that those drawing were not overpainted!
and I'm having a hard time beleiving that they are not ....

for me i dont care about overpainting as long as poeple dont try to fool anyone with it ...

Ciao! merry christmass everyone!
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:00 pm     Reply with quote
What you suggest I am doing does not really make sense. Why would I spend so much time drawing something with a pencil, and then just overpaint a photo?

Others have suspected the same thing at this other art forum. So, at that other art forum I uploaded some pictures that presented my process. Ther� does not s�em to be a way to do that at this forum. Anyway, this is why I tơok a photo of my folder of pencil drawings and present it at my blogspot. The process that I explain at the blogspot is ind�ed the art method. If it wasn't, I would tell you.

I will answer any techical questions you have abou the process. If you know photoshop, you understand about painting in layers. You should know about multiply layers, ađd layers, and about dodge and burn. If you do not know about these things, you will never understand the process. The process is not really a secret. It has b�en around a long time. You can easily find tutorials for fr�e on the internet.

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!!!
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:16 pm     Reply with quote
g.owen wrote:
at that other art forum I uploaded some pictures that presented my process. Ther� does not s�em to be a way to do that at this forum.


I'd be interested in seeing the process. Not sure why you think it can't be shown here at Sijun. At any rate, if not here, perhaps you could give a link to the thread in the other forum.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:59 pm     Reply with quote
eyewoo wrote:

I'd be interested in seeing the process. Not sure why you think it can't be shown here at Sijun. At any rate, if not here, perhaps you could give a link to the thread in the other forum.


I do not undertand how to upload pictures in this forum. Anyway, if you read my blogspot, it gives you the general overview. And I could tell you about the other forum, where I submitted even more details.....but it somehow seems wrong to give a link to another forum that is competing with this forum - or is this being overly sensitive?
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 10:16 pm     Reply with quote
To post pics in sijun, simply enclose the url to the image location with these two tags (example): [IMG]http://www.your url here.com[/IMG]

Simple as that.

I have no problem with the subject matter. You believe what you believe and that's fine as long as you aren't hurting anyone or insulting anyone else's beliefs.

As for the art, I am suspicious that you are applying filters to photographs. I looked at the stuff in your blog, and the quality of the drawing is inconsisent. Either you are tracing directly over photographs, or you are running a "find edges" filter over a photo and multiplying it over another photo with a different filter. For example, I made a (very quick) sample to show my recreated technique:


As for the painting, the compositing of elements is also very inconsistent. You have incredibly detailed characters that have poorly done shadows over obvious photographs. To be fair however, you did describe using photographs in you blog. On top of that, the "magical" elements of the strip don't seem to fit anything else, and are also of varying quality.

Regarding the figures, I think you are (at the very least) using either a traced drawing or the afformentioned "find edges" technique over a filter pass. The texture you've acheived looks far too realistic to not involve photo textures. It's OK to do that, just don't try to pass it off as all paint; People can tell. Again, here is my recreation:


If you really did paint these, my apologies. If that is the case, you have an extraordinary ability to mimic real-life textures and proportion At the very least, you got a solid crit out of me.

::EDIT:: I just looked at the clock, Merry Christmas!
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 9:57 am     Reply with quote
Wrong. But you have successfully approximated the method that I most often use for backgrounds. But you are wrong about the method as it pertains to the characters. They are indeed pencil drawn, scanned into a computer, and colored/painted in a photoshop type program. Most people familiar with photoshop suspect that I do what you suggest. But that is not the case.

You can see the method at another forum. There, I am responding to another artist that suggests the same things that you suggest (but you were kinder and more technical). Anyway, I responded to what he said by uploading some pictures and details about the method. See the method here: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=83572

If you don't believe me, that�s OK. I am not really concerned about that. I do feel that I need to respond to such suspicions though. You can also go to www.temptthemessiah.blogspot.com and see an actual photo I took of me and my folder of pencil drawings.

For real life textures - there are texture nibs in my art program. For proportion - its all about reference. Also, you can achieve these things with a pencil remarkably well - consider the "Ghost Riders in the Sky" pencil drawing at this forum - http://forums.sijun.com/viewtopic.php?t=40886. He could scan that into a computer, set it to mulitply, and color/paint it. If he had a photo that he used for reference, he could look at that while he paints and end up with art that is much better than mine.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 10:41 am     Reply with quote
Hmmm...

Well, I looked at your step-by-step, and you're right, I think I owe an apology. It DOES look like you are filtering stuff alot, but you acknowledged that.

I think you're getting the suspicions because your figures have such distinct outlines over fine gradations that it looks just like a find edges filter pass. Back off on your outlines a bit, and I think it will help alot.

Hope you're having a good holiday,
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 2:21 pm     Reply with quote
Jimmyjimjim wrote:


...I think you're getting the suspicions because your figures have such distinct outlines over fine gradations that it looks just like a find edges filter pass. Back off on your outlines a bit, and I think it will help alot...


Again, the characters are drawn with pencil, scanned into computer, and painted/colored using art program. The backgrounds have a photo foundation that I paint upon and apply filters in an effort to integrate it with the pencil work.

And your suggestion about "backing off on outlines" may result in art that people are less suspicious about, but it does not look as good to me. When I first started the project, I did not have the outlines, at all. Eventually, I found myself favoring more linework, which included a bold outline around the figure (like what you see now). For some reason, to me it looked better with the linework - maybe because I grew up looking at comics, or something. Anyway, I went back and changed it so that the linework would show on all of it. Maybe I should not have done this, but that's just the way it went.

Maybe I'll do a pin-up or something, without the linework; and see if people respond differently.

And thanks for the comments. I really enjoy responding to people that are knowledgable about the arts and have meaningful observations and responses. Yours has been the best one yet. Having said that, I welcome all comments. They don't HAVE to be technical.

EDIT: After learning how to post images, I decided to present a picture illustrating what Jimmyjimjim and I have been talking about. In this picture, Christ was drawn with a pencil, scanned into computer, and colored with in an art program. The background has a photo foundation. I take it through many steps, one of which is a contour effect similiar to the crucifixion above, to make it integrate with the pencil drawing. The sky is done with the art program.

http://home.windstream.net/themessiah
http://home.windstream.net/themessiah/Part2.html
www.temptthemessiah.blogspot.com - see pencil work and method overview


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 2:28 pm     Reply with quote
G.owen....

My opinion is that you are very talented....i've seen your pencil drawings....

I'm here to see art, and that's exactly what you did.....no matter what you draw....

you've got my respects.....
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 9:29 am     Reply with quote
Can somebody tell me how jimmyjimjim posted those images here. I am still not getting this. You have me permission to talk to me like I am a complete dummy on this subject....because I am!!!!

I am guessing that I need an off-site place to store images, and then somehow link to that. If so, what are some places, and how do I accomplish this???
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You already have them online... Click the "Img" button below the subject line to start the image tag, then enter in the URL of the image you want displayed, then click Img again to close the tag. Alternatively you can type it in, but it should look like this either way:

[img]http://home.windstream.net/themessiah/index.html_files/image002.jpg[/img]
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:03 am     Reply with quote
I understand now. Thanks

Here is a picture from part 2 - A NEW VERSION OF IT. I am thinking about changing my font. Some have said that my text does not match well with the art. Also, some have said that the word balloons are distracting. Any thoughts?

http://home.windstream.net/themessiah
http://home.windstream.net/themessiah/Part2.html
www.temptthemessiah.blogspot.com - see pencil work and method overview


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 4:20 pm     Reply with quote
If it looks like a duck, smells like a duck, and acts like a duck... then it is a duck.

I can't help but notice that people at CA.org, on you're blog, and here, all seem to think you're manipulating photos in some way. Personally I feel like you're somehow being dishonest. I can accept that you "drew" those drawings, but buddy, you have to admit you've utilized photos to get the end result. It certainly looks like you've traced photographs to achieve your pencil work. and then referenced the photographs for achieving your values. If not, prove me wrong and post the photographs... or am I to believe you did it all from imagination?

I find it offensive that you would insinuate artistic talent and actually have the balls to argue with people who have some, if not a great deal of passion and respect for the craft and it's history.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:08 pm     Reply with quote
The pencils are based on photos anyway, since the characters have a lot of distortion that's caused by the lens.. It's very obvious. The changes in eye levels and foreshortening reveal this. Sorry.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:42 pm     Reply with quote
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... or am I to believe you did it all from imagination?...


Have you actually read my blogspot? When I introducted myself to CA.org, I did not have all that information that you see there. I eventually put that up to explain how I did things because people assumed I was trying to present that I did all that without photos. I have NOT been dishonest. You may not agree with my process - but I don't NEED you to. What I would like is for you to give me feedback on specific things that will help me make it better.

Mikko K, don't be "sorry" about your accurate observations. It does not offend me.

If you guys actually read my blogspot, perhaps you would not feel the way you do. www.temptthemessiah.blogspot.com

And if you have not seen this work of sequential art, check it out and tell me what you think......and how to make it better.
http://home.windstream.net/themessiah

ART+ART=MORE ART.
Part 3 coming very,very soon.

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