[M@.]

Hi folks!

I workd a bit more on an earlier speedie.
the speedie :


the final :


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[FallDamage]

Great stuff. I'm always struck by your lighting.

[Sumaleth]

Love it.
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[Sup_Ben]

Yes. Good

[J.edt]

really nice! But I sort of miss the people and stuff between the ship and the guy in front in the speedie...

[Ranath]

nice work

[Petri.J]

Amazing!
It's great to look at your "webpage" and see how fast you have devloped from medium level photoshop artist to master.
Great job.
What monitor do you have by the way? I have to adjust my crappy monitor to see the darkest colors, and adjust it back to see the brightest colors. That's kind of nerve wracking some times.

[gizmodus]

Oh, that's cool!
The extended part on the right fits very well and makes the composition even better. The only (tiny) crit is the upper part of the building on the middle left which topples a bit over. It's really not grave but even though it bugs me a bit
Thanks for posting!

[Murtaza]

Lovely, i especially like the design of the spaceship

[Hideyoshi]

dude, you should do more finished stuff! Very nice!

[Rolando.]

Very nice ligthning and cool design But I think final picture feels a little empty without the crew in the background.

[Naeem]

beautiful.
i love how every piece you do is so rich in color. and i like the way you detailed too. great work.
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[Lunatique]

Cleaned up quite nice. I'm surprised I don't see more people finishing their better speedpaints.

Those two grey rectangles with yellow highlights near the bottom, a bit to the left of the center--they look like doorways? But they aren't reading too well--maybe it's the value or the saturation--but it looks strange.

[Theo-W-P.]

Wow, That's really cool. Especially the ship. And such great lighting.
One of my favorite things about all your pieces is that ambient sky light that's always reflecting off of everything.

Looks like you did a little bit of cloning down there on the bottom right-ish
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[M@.]

Falldamage : thanks man

Sumaleth : thanks, glad you like.

Sup_Ben : thank you

J.edt : yeah you're not the only one . Iwas lazy

Ranath : thx

Petri.J : kiitos. lol "webpage" ... I gotta do a proper one some day :d well I got a cintiq 21ux, it's pretty much nicely calibrated I think.

gizmodus : thanks for the comment.

Murtaza : thx

Hideyoshi : yeah definitely.

Rolando. : thx

annisahmad : thx man

Lunatique : thx Rob. Yep they are doors , I guess you're right, the value is a bit off.But you did read it well in the end

Theo : thx man. Yeah I definitely try to keep the sky in mind when I put my values. Hehe you spotted it I spotted that I didn't clean up that part right in the end, but decided to keep it that way anyway


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here's the 3D wire I used for perspective guide :

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[faeklone]

To me the grittiness of the speedpainting draws me into it more than the perfection of the actual drawing. It seems to me as if the speed painting has more life to it, a vibrance perhaps due to the process by which it was made that seems to be lacking in the second one. I'm not complaining about detail. I would love to see detail in the speed painting version. I kinda see the speedpainting as the more successful piece of the two thusfar.
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[Dekard]

I don't know I think the confusion comes in where there isn't as much detail in the speed painting as your eyes and imagination are creating the detail on the more finished final rendering those areas are now refined and it removes your imagination from creating detail where before was not any..

imo...

Great stuff, both of them
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[Godwin]

nice, I love the lighting like most others too. I think it's interesting to note that the speed piece actually had a rather different setting in mind, and the "finished" piece also has a nice "unfinished" aesthetic to it.
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[Rav3n.]

i have to agree with some of the previous posts. the speedpainting has a lot more edge to it.

what i see in the speedpainting is a rough and claustrophobic, cyber punked, rusted future, full of metal junk on the streets, escape from L.A type of setting, you know, fight for the fittest, whereas in the final painting all that has been opened and cleaned up into a shiny tree-friendly hippieland with spaceships running on soap bubbles.

sorry for the harsh critique awesome stuff, top notch!

[dhood]

Nice job.

[Tomasis]

pretty impressive!