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Naeem · Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 6:38 pm

hahahaha!!
i love them both. very good! and i also like the color/composition Smile

. keep it up
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Tinusch · Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:09 pm

Thank you, much appreciated.

gLitterbug · Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 2:41 pm

Tinusch you're a posting machine lately, catching up on all that lost time? Smile

The first image creeps me out. Something about the look of some of your faces/heads that punch me right in the gut. Probably the eyes for the first guy and fleshy bubbly feel for the second one. Crit would be that the eyebrows on the first should go a bit into the eyes, they seem a bit cut off and flat.

Not sure if it was intended, but the chick in the 2nd picture looks a bit sad or pained to me? Also I think the tree could�ve used some better shadows on the branches, but thats about the only crit I can think of.

All in all 2 solid illustrations. Done for jobs? Illustration for articles perhaps?

Tinusch · Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 7:18 pm

Thanks again for the reply. Youre really keeping me motivated u know that? Youre right about those brows, they were definitely an afterthought, you caught me. Otherwise the image is an indirect commentary on my fat roommate who eats all the groceries and doesnt pay his bills, hence all my income being automatically deposited into his stomach. The second, I guess I didn't really consider the mood of the chick, nor did I with anything else in the image, Its a totally random picture, but again the tree was one of the last things I threw in and I guess it shows. Thanks again for the input, definitely helps.

Tinusch · Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 7:23 pm

And btw, in answer to ur question, they werent done for jobs, just recreational.

Immortal_Souls · Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:44 am

Nice stuff Tinusch although something bugs me some with the bottom image. The shadows dont seem right. For example, the fencing on the right is shadow casted straighter than the barn shadow. Plus I think the barn should be a little darker because its hiding from the sun.
Another feeling I get is there should be some tree shadow sneaking in aswell because it seems like its getting in the way a little of all the other objects between the sun and the fencing.
I hope I didnt discourage you because you're doing heaps good! Well done! Hoping to see more too Smile

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