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kolorken
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awesome...many of them need more contrast but overall good...
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| Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 9:44 pm |
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I'm going to be the dick here and say you need alot of work. There are alot more issues than contrast. The eyes on your portraits look very cartoony. Draw eyes with shadow and highlight, not outline and fill. Also, some look assymetrical. Get a good "how-to" book and study up.
Your cars are looking promising, you need some work on your elipses and the width of your vehicles..
One other thing-
"here r sum pics i drew.
let me know wut u think about them!"
Try this-
Featured on this page are works from [insert time period]. Please sign my guestbook and let me know what you think!"
Spell correctly, man. No one will take you seriously if they see that kind of grammar on your homepage unless they're 13. |
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