[Tinusch]

[gLitterbug]

You're on a roll lately it seems Tinusch.

Not much crits this time from me, except that the shading on the mouse somehow looks odd, not sure why but maybe its the totally black shadows. I would also tone down the brighest parts of the cats a bit, I think that would make it look better overall.

Apart from that it is a solid image and I like the composition very much.

[Tinusch]

Glitterbug, thanks a ton again. I think you were totally right on toning down the bright spots, looks much more ominous now. As for the mouse, I actually went back darkened the shadows later on in the image, because otherwise the mouse looked too washed out next to the black cat. I updated the above image. Thanks again

[Exclamation]

I think what was bothering gLitterbug is that the mouse (rat?) doesn't look furry. It looks newborn, void of fur.

Otherwise, ya, most definitely an unlucky outing
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[Tinusch]

Good point. I added some fur detail, some of which disappeared after I scaled it down, and gave him some whiskers and ribs too.

[Ragnarok]

I love it

Maybe the mouse anatomy could be better? Hmm... don't know
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[gLitterbug]

I could keep one of the dead mice my cats bring in next time and take a photo of you or send it to you via mail Tinusch. Just in case you want to perfect your anatomy