[Squier]

Hi! I did this layout just to see if the pose and the perspective are working.
What do you think? What should I leave or change? Don�t pay too much attention to details or anatomy, for they are roughly sketched. Nevertheless, I would really appreciate your critics and opininos, as hard as they could be.
Thank you very much!

[Joe84]

i think its pretty good, all u gotta do is clean up the line quality.
also look out for the thighs...if the right leg of spidey is coming forward. The thigh should be shorter in perspective. Also the calf on the left leg is twisted uncomfortably...

Also this isnt necessarily wrong, but the right arm of spidey, i pushed back more. anyways hope this helped.


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