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velinov · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Jul 2005 Posts: 35

Hi There...

I haven't post since a long time ago. I'm pretty busy right now with a few game projects, but take a look what I have done in my spare time. Just for fun, same as my last post (Mother's will). Maybe this is her husband...

Cheers

Mitsui · Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 5:35 am

yeah! You're back! Awesome character and coloring work as usual!
Love it! On thin that I would change is that I would define the ground just a little bit cause now he seems to be floating. Or maybe it's just the contact shadow that looks odd.

Great work buddy!

Cheers
Goro
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neff · Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 9:44 am

absolutly amazzing.. its slick, its cool and you used a very nice colorset!
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see · Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 9:45 am

i hope you dont mind that i did this overpaint. I love your work but there is something wrong about his proportions. Maybe you did this intentionally to make him look more dynmaic.

here we go

Mikko K · member Member # Joined: 29 Apr 2003 Posts: 639

Technically solid stuff.

His chest is still missing even in See's overpaint. It's like the shoulder to the right is portrayed from front, and the other shoulder from a side view. As a result he has a quite deformed torso.

see · Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 11:49 am

your right Mikko -- i started changing parts and noticed that there is much more to work over. deformed torso as you mentioned

Ylla · Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 3:52 pm

I agree with the "floating" comment. Especially since the shadow under both of his feet looks like something ELSE is casting it, not his feet and legs.

Also, given how you're done some wonderful contrasts and sharp edges on the rest of him, it seems kind of wierd that the pants folds in his crotch are that light color. It seems like in between his legs, it should be dark there, like under the bag, on the right edge of the pant.

I also wish the knives would look sharp. They kind of look like they're made of plastic for some action figure.

Dig the pinks in the shading though, and again, dig some of the sharp edges on him. Except for the knives, the whole image is very sharp.
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