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maui
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 5:19 am     Reply with quote
took around 5 hrs on PSCS2 and on a graphire... i need a damn intuos man CRITS ARE NEEDED PLEASE!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 5:30 am     Reply with quote
Back from North Korea?
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maui
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 5:31 am     Reply with quote
hahaha, thank god i din go there in the first place... haha.. i would come back without limbs
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 6:01 am     Reply with quote
nice drawing, though. gloomy, as it should be. only I'd do something about the eyes, like, they're too bright. I think they should reflect some darkness...
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maui
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 5:50 am     Reply with quote
ok i will... thanks man
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 10:45 am     Reply with quote
You need to adjust the contrast of your clouds more... right now it looks like you have four layers of vertically stacked clouds in the sky. They don't get much smaller as they approach the horizon, nor does their perspective change.

The shading on the mask looks a little lumpy, and the shading doesn't look consistent - it seems very asymetrical. Try adjusting the placement of his right cheek, I think. Maybe add some seams.
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maui
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 6:57 am     Reply with quote
ok thanks a million!... ill take that to consideration
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