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james wolf
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 Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:00 pm |
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| its a nice composition but it would be cool to see a full figure. |
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james wolf
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| Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 3:26 pm |
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theres story enough to come up with the idea but not enough to explain, this is kinda practice on how to make a scary face so i've been doing a bunch of similar heads, normally i would have a full figure but i draw that in everything so. it took around 4 hours, it was kindof an experiment on the computer. 
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| Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 4:20 pm |
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Hey man! Nice work! I really love the texture and main idea of this piece... The angle of the nose is to prominent, to the angle of the face, you need to have the head tilted back allot further to get an angle like that on the nose. Also I don�t see any wonderful stretch marks from opening your mouth that wide.. Keep on going!
Quick over paint in Oc hope you dont mind! Took away from the girly look but it shows you what i mean with the face and nose... http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/8026/overpaint013uj.jpg |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 8:25 pm |
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| I love it - I don't believe you should add a body at all. Maybe add a border around it without actually cutting off any of the image if you know what I mean. I think it would add a finishing touch to it ^_^. |
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james wolf
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| Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:36 pm |
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good advice all, an i like the border idea, i'm doin a few heads and i might merge them all into one peice separated by borders, i guess i'll post em on this thread from now on, possibly
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