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Ivey · Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:21 pm

I am working on a warrior for my boyfriend, he has an idea for a d&d comic... I need help on all of my recent stuff though.. and any help is AWSOME!

He keeps telling me the guy I am drawing is "not big enough". I am having a hard time capturing a monsterous beastial dude..

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eliseu gouveia · Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:06 pm

I really like your style fine as it is.

However, looking at your samples, I can see what he means (I hope?).

He�s a bit slender when compared with the muscular types you see in wrestling shows and the llke.

Grab a couple photos from bodybuilding and compare, you�ll see what I�m talking about, those guys have bodies the size of trucks. Razz

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Pixelbrush · Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:09 am

I agree with eliseu about the body.
And perhaps you should make the face more square and jaw stronger.

But I like your style very much. Looks very good.

sprout · Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:12 pm

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Ivey · Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 5:30 am

notic · Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 6:03 am

Hi Ivey,

I think the main problem with the face is, that's its too feminine.
As you wrote yourself, the chin is not very strong.
Lower the angle of the jaw, make the chin wider, nose stronger, lower the eyebrows.

take a look at these pages:

http://d538518.u320.bigcrawler.com/headhands/19.htm

http://d538518.u320.bigcrawler.com/headhands/38.htm

nice style you've got, i like "somechick.jpg".