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godee
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 Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 1:50 am |
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i painted this for a friend's band.. would appreciate c&c if you're so inclined..
can check Haole Rot out at http://www.myspace.com/haolerot 
thnx.. ima post a couple other paintings in the wip too..
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neff
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| Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 3:11 pm |
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looks really cool, nice colors and cocnept, but its too dirty and blurry, your should clean it up and use a real font...
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frantic
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| Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 3:48 am |
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Looks really unique but I suggest you to make the hanging guy smaller. Comparing to the distance of the ship an stuff it looks not right. Or you can make the palm tree bigger maybe, but the best way is to make the guy smaller I believe. The font looks a little hard to read, a bit confusing. And maybe you can work on that sun a bit more, adding some colors to the sky would be useful. It looks stiff to me. But looks great overall, you captured the mood very well. Keep on!!!
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godee
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| Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 11:31 pm |
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thnx guys.. wht part of the what part of the text is in issue?... the band's name.. haole rot.. or the album title.. are you british?
thnx for the input 
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WillLull
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| Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 1:42 am |
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| Hey, I really like. I just think the mountains onto the right could use some more detail. They kinda remind me of two loaves of bread. |
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frantic
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| Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 7:14 am |
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Hi godee,
The issue part is the bands name. haole rot. The title is ok to me. I love the clouds by the way;)
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Pixelbrush
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| Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 9:50 am |
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| I agree the blur part but cool design anyway. Good work. |
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