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agios
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nice composition and rendering, but the lighting is a little strange, or rather subdued, the values don't seem to be pushed enough, with disparity of shading between areas (that doesn't look like it's due to depth), and there's quite a flat look. There's also a strong highlight from the edge of her hair/head that would suggest backlighting but the general brightness behind/ontop does not really correspond to that.
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| Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 12:09 am |
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yes you have right my friend for the highlight on the head and hair...yes there is no possible strong light from behind...but i wanted to express the light that comes from her inside...thank you very much for the comment and critique, really appreciated.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 4:34 pm |
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THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS INNOCENCE, ONLY VARYING DEGREES OF GUILT!
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| Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 2:44 pm |
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Cool re agie, but a little more color would be nice.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 2:03 am |
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Very nice soft focus look to it, beautiful lines and flow!!
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| Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:06 pm |
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| Is that monica belluci? Good illustration either way. |
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