[Affected]

Just painting practice. Next I'll try to be looser, set values down more firmly and rapidly and generally fiddle around less.

[art4x]

great technique,,, it's just not very intriguing though...looks like that one sewer in that one place... little creepy in that way... nice lighting too!
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[pixel farmer]

Its great... Its a very clean sewer, I would probably make it more gritty and give it age making it even more creepy!

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[Joe84]

yeah its too clean

[Godwin]

[Affected]

Godwin: if you mean whether this is going to be used in a film, no. It was a technical test for a school film in a way, but it's not going to be used for anything.

I've kind of gotten this liking for dull images recently... Don't know why. Maybe something will come out of it. I guess this could have used more debris etc.

Thanks for the comments!

[topeira]

it's a very nice work. looks good and the textures look like.. .they belong

as the others said - it IS too clean. steryl enviroments look somewhat unnatural in most cases. maybe more details can add life and a feeling of realism to it. look for reference of sewers if u need.

also i think that it could have looked a lot more interesting if u had put more effort into the sketching part - a better more interesting composition is needed here. it's too simetrical IMO. also the lines are all vertical or horisontal. it's too boring in this case. if u had chosen a POv that is lower or higher and a lil on the side than the lines wouldnt have been to aligned and un-interesting.
i dont want to offend u or this piece cuz it's a great one with realli nice lightning and perspective. just could have been better. the primary sketch is incredibly important - setting a good composition in vital and can make all the difference.

keep it up!
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