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tttia
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 Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:15 am |
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Practicing Anatomy with a painting study. I think my best yet, though there are still areas I struggle with. Please let me know where it is wrong!
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Japong
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| Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:51 am |
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| I'm no expert myself, but the folds on her dress don't seem to contour to her body enough, especially around her hips/navel. Also, her face seems lumpy... possibly something to do with the way her eyes and eyebrows are placed. |
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tttia
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| Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 12:26 am |
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changed some of the face structure around the brow, jaw line, repositioned the eyes etc.
Hope it helped. |
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| Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 12:55 am |
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| i think you should add more details to the background, lighting |
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Godwin
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| Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 1:58 am |
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Err NewEra, it's a study on a figure?
I think it looks better than when I first saw it, the eyes were a little off, but are you working from reference? If so maybe it'd be good to post it.
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