[an2an]

critique? ))
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[ax--hv]

Отличные наброски, товарищ Антонов! :)

[Affected]

Clearly you've got a pretty patient approach to rendering, that's good. I'm not sure the way you chose to render the hand for example is really best for such an organic form - the palm area for example seems to have a very regular hatching pattern. The pencil drawings could probably benefit from making your strokes somewhat bolder (how soft a pencil are you using?) and using a more systematic approach to the direction of your strokes. The barrel picture is a good example, your strokes don't always work to emphasize the form. Generally speaking the forms are good, but you lose something in the rendering... I prefer the sketchier version of the drawing of the phone and game controller for example. Try to be confident with your strokes. I struggle with that a lot myself, but sometimes things snap into place. Don't go over and over your lines, try to keep them clean.

Actually, looking at the cars, you have good linework there. I probably am not the one to give you advice in that area...

[Ranath]

those blue car sketchs are very nice

[an2an]

ax--hv, спасибо, спасибо! )))
Affected, thanx. i use HB for composition and 2B - for deep shade.
Ranath, tnanx






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[asianguy971]

hey, really nice job on the crosshatching with the cars. they look amazing
i was wondering....what do u use for them-what medium?
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[neff]

these hard shapes are brilliant!
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[Tomasis]

good renderings, dude, get a digital tablet and pen now if you dont have. so you can paint more on digital way at own way. youre enough good goodluck

[Naeem]

i love them. great work
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[The Insane Lemur]

very pretty, i enjoy your work!