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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:37 am |
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Hi folks,
did this one for my aunt. let me know what you think, and which area above all others I should do more on if I had time/skill enough.
Should come out pretty big, A2 kinda size, possibly slightly larger, (wallet allowing). Anyone know of any printing options for a sentimental/homely kind of print as opposed to commercial/'pro' looking prints? Printing on to canvas is good/expensive/ugly/overraterd/awesome?
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If any one has any ideas about those background hills, clue me in. Thanks!
Fred |
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Odds member
Member # Joined: 17 Sep 2004 Posts: 374
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 10:14 am |
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Awww, so cute.
The hills look pretty good, except there isn't enough value variation in them, I think. They look a little too flat because of this. Also, you should make the leaves have some more intense specular light on them (like the dogs do). If the dogs have it, the leaves gotta have it too. Nice work, overall; keep it up- |
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 2:21 am |
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The white outline round the dogs is just that. makes em stand out etc. the leaves are just a background, I'm pretty happy leaving them without highlights and reflections.
Thanks tho. |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 4:51 am |
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Looks just fine to me. The white outline around the dogs works very well too. It�s quite obvious its stylistic choice rather than lack of understanding of light.
Just one question, do you plan on keeping that green border? |
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:33 am |
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what, you reckon lose the green border? |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 1:33 pm |
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Not necessarily lose, but make it more dark or something. Right now it�s just distracting from the painting, very much so to me at least. |
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ElfGirlKimmy member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2005 Posts: 145 Location: Oregon, USA
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:33 am |
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Have to agree with glitterbug, the color of the border is distracting. The rest of the piece is great though, I wouldn't change a thing. Nice work Capt. Fred. _________________ DA Gallery| LiveJournal
...Quack. O.o |
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 5:15 pm |
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maybe the DIY impasto paint effect really lowers the tone and makes it tasteless? |
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allpetter member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2003 Posts: 395 Location: sweden
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 11:46 pm |
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I like it alot!
The teture is great on the tree work.
The overall painting has great colouring.
the bright sillhuete on the two dogs could be worked on though.
everything else looks great. _________________ Fru Tina K�ttet |
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Thrush member
Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2000 Posts: 134 Location: Portland, Oregon
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:17 am |
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Hey Capt. Fred,
Nice improvement in the second image. The first was nice but pushing the detail here and there plus changing to a darker more sophisticated border puts it over the top. Nice work. _________________ All of it is real...
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:40 pm |
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I know this is old but here's the end of it at long last.
Human included for scale:
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watmough member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2003 Posts: 779 Location: Rockland, ME
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 7:51 pm |
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looks great,Fred!
the print turned out well,eh?
was it difficult to print that?
what surface did you print on? |
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 4:24 am |
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thanks watmough. The hardest part was finding somewhere nearby. It was no pro print shop, it was just a high-street get-your-digital-photos-printed place. I printed it onto canvas to loose the clinical/commercial look.
the print was good, though the picture has a tendency to blend so totally into the background you can hardly see it when your head is pointing right at it. i got it framed and mounted so that's not just unprinted-on white surrounding it. Overall, it's cheesy but then I guess that's what's called for with something like this :) |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 6:28 pm |
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I like this, Fred. Looks pro.
Question:
what was the final image/resolution size?
Interested in getting some prints done as well. |
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:47 am |
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Started at 2,900 by 4,100 px (A3 size at 250 dpi)
Just before printing I enlarged it to A2- 4,100 by 5,900 same resolution.
Judging by the print, it wouldn't have made any difference to work at higher resolution, which looked as clear as it could have I think. |
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