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Sinister_Urge junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Nov 2004 Posts: 10 Location: Ireland
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 8:36 am |
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Hi, still working on this painting and I would really appreciate some feedback on it,
Cheers |
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Antialias junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Jun 2002 Posts: 20 Location: Portland
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 9:09 pm |
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I think the three ghost faces in the middle need some more definition. Right now they have a bit of the "scream" movie look and don't really feel as frightening as they could be. The middle one is closer though, perhaps bring in some slight realistic facial features, nose, hair, or maybe more of a skull look.
It looks like you've tried to have the red flame illuminate the wing a bit. I would push that a bit more, but also have it cast onto other parts of him like his chest, face, etc.
The skull on the bottom left looks a little deformed. Those are the main issues I see.
Looking good so far. |
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illumineering junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Jul 2005 Posts: 6 Location: Pennsylvania
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 12:57 pm |
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Good start. The hands of the angel look like they want to hold something like a staff/scepter or lost soul maybe...I really like the demon at the top. Please post your progress. |
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