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scallywag
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 10:33 am     Reply with quote
Hi all, I've been staring at this too long, is the perspective on the background completely wacked with respect to the figures, and if so could anyone suggest a fix? Thanks.



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PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 5:11 pm     Reply with quote
To me it looks like your horizon line should be a lot lower to match the people. And I think the lens should be a lot "flatter", meaning the perspective would be flattened out (ie. vanishing points a lot further apart, and the distance should appear closer).
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:39 am     Reply with quote
Thanks Sumaleth, that was handy advice. I only altered the perspective a little along the lines you suggested but I'm much happier with it.

Also resized a few body parts until I was happy, now doing some rendering.

Any other comments welcome.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:05 am     Reply with quote
still looks kinda strange, from this perspective it looks more like a top-down view at the position of the dancers, but I'm not sure, might want to replace them with simple blocks or something to be sure
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