[morano]

here it is a concept for video game.Very very bad girl ,some called "monster ".
but still she must be very atractive, young and sexy ...hmm

any comments or suggestions ?


MORANO

[neff]

waaah
i'm shocked, so it's looking good

some more details and reflections on that sword would be fine
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[ElfGirlKimmy]

Whoa. Its very scary, and very good. And she's not un-attractive, so I think you must be doing good. *hides from scary lady*
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[allpetter]

(edit: Just checked out your website. I adore your work! )

Very nice!

I really like the use of colour, the shading.
The composition is nice too!

I think you succeded in making a young monster like girl.
The sexyness is also there.
But I think it would do the trick to adjust a miner atribute a female has.

Make the forhead less variated in depth, less bumpy.

I also think the omnious look in her facial expression makes her look too much of a monster.
If you would make her abit less killer looking, she would reveal more sexyness.

Her hair should be lowered on the forhead abit to.

Her left arm (the one in the back) *seems* too close to the viewer.
I don't think there is anything wrong with the anatomy.
I think it's easily fixed by adjusting the relation to the part where the arm meets with the rest of the character

You also forgot sweatpearls, which one aviously would get by all the blood on her face.
How many did she kill you said before the picture was painted?

I took the freedom to make a overpaint to show you what I meant by all this ramble.



This is only my opinion. I really like how you achieved the very insane look.
My overpaint killed alot of that.
But I guess it's a matter of how much of the sexyness you want to reveal in a young monster girl. And the other way around.

Great work!
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[morano]

Thank You All for comments.

to be continued....

[Anthony]

Great image! She doesn't look sexy to me though, fuck that, I'm keeping it well inside my pants and away from her sword haha
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