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ElfGirlKimmy
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 Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 6:57 pm |
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Here's a charcoal piece I just finished for a class. Some of the marking style is Jim Dine influenced (which was part of the assignment - choose an artist and glean from their style of mark-making).
Anyways, let me know what you think. 
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jinnseng
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| Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 11:20 pm |
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| I think it's great to see some charcoal work here. It's looking good. I'm trying to get back into doing charcoal still lifes... i'm finding I lose concentration after about 20 minutes working on it. Hopefully this will inspire me to really work at it some more. |
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MCMA
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 4:54 am |
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I like this piece too. I'm not familiar with Jim Dine so it feels very fresh to me. Hope it has a lot of your touch too of course. Great mood. Only crit is her right upper leg (her perspective) that looks a little thin. For the next one I mean 
I must try charcoals more, got inspired too. Fixative stinks brrrr.
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 9:49 am |
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Thanks for the feedback guys, Glad you like it and found inspiration here.  Very cool.
And yeah, I noticed the leg issue too. Oh well. 
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