[RobG]

hi, a new pic this morning.


crits and comments plz


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[Heysoos]

ah, now thats very cool and dynamic. also strengthens the idea that you would be very good at illustrating childrens books, theres definitely a story going on here.
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[The Real Mark]

I can imagine the sound of one of those horns the ewoks blow in the RotJ

[Bjornar]

I like it. I agree that it's a type of style you would like to see in a childrens book or even some cool comics. I would like to point out bottom right hand corner. I'm not shure what's going on there, could have been nice with a clearer definition wheter it's leaves, birds or butterflies. Perhaps a close up of them bits, showing what it is. But overall I like the style, it's professional looking and pleasing to the eye.

[insane007]

I think it's leaves and pollen

[Ragnarok]

I just love those trees =)
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[RobG]

thanks alot for your crits people appreciate it
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[Dery]

I love the lightness of this piece.
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[Awetopsy]

and the whales last thought before it hit the ground was "I wonder if this 'land' will be freindly?"

[Max]

wow, I really like it, awesome feeling!

[ElfGirlKimmy]

That is AWESOME! What a dynamic perspective and brilliant idea. So cool.
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[gLitterbug]

I love the trees, style is just grand.

[jfrancis]

I like it a lot!

Maybe a little more contrast; maybe warmer trunks and cooler trunk shadows?

I'd like to feel more that I'm looking up at the bottoms of clouds. Those clouds don't look like they are being seen froma dramatic low angle.

[LadyHydralisk]

The perspective is gorgeous, the concept unique, but I'm not loving the lack of diversity in the color and also value range in the trees especially...of course probably you would fix that in the finished piece.