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Pringle
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 3:59 am     Reply with quote
Hey all.

I did these in February for my portfolio.
The rockterrain took about 30 hours and the factory thingy around 9.

Critique is very welcome.

Cheers Pringle



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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 5:02 am     Reply with quote
Very impressive; nice perspective.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 5:07 am     Reply with quote
Emm, also, if I may offer one small crit. To me, at least, -in the rock terrain pic- the perspective on the building closest to the viewer looks a bit 2 dimensional, almost as if we were viewing it in profile. It's got something to do with that bottom bit. Again, it might just be me that thinks it's a bit out of whack. Otherwise, great work.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 6:29 am     Reply with quote
Great pics.

And falldamage is right about the nearest building in the first image -- feels like we should be looking up at it more.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 6:32 am     Reply with quote
you own me pringle Smile
rock textures are particularly well handled, i can see where falldamage is coming from, think it's less to do with perspective and more to do with the fact it's the same saturation all the way up the buildings up front, if it were gradiated up, light at top it'd give them more of the illusion and help the atmosphere, great perspective though, and, i'll say it again, the rockwork is insane. Diggin the colours in the second too, can see strong progression in your stuff man
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 8:49 am     Reply with quote
Great work Pringle. Awesome atmosphere and nice use of scale...as usual. : )
I have to agree with what has been said above. I have to add some things though: several parts don't look finished in your pic like for example the rocks in the middleground on the left, and maybe these three rocks right infront of the factory need some retouch. The sky is pure white, that might be realistic with such a dark foreground but I think some clouds would be nice. To create some kind of "flow" I would add smoke comming out of the factory. This creates depth, if made correctly, too.
Second one is very nice. Nothing to crit here.
Anyway, I am not half as good as you, so...don't take my suggestions too serious Very Happy
Keep up the good work! Loving your stuff...
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 12:59 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work dude!

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 2:54 pm     Reply with quote
wow, I really like both of those. very powerful sense of scale and atmosphere. course that can be said about most your work.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 2:59 pm     Reply with quote
id have to agree with heysoos
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 3:22 pm     Reply with quote
I'm going to repeat it again: Scale and atmosphere! Very very nice! Do you start in B&W and add color later?
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 4:13 pm     Reply with quote
Oh wow, gorgeous. That rock texture is incredible. Its all incredible. Really awesome stuff.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 10:57 pm     Reply with quote
wow! very good I like it! Razz Razz
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 11:52 pm     Reply with quote
I adore the atmosphere&render quality on the first one.
And as someone said before about the 2nd it may need somethig like smoke... so you create more depth in there.

Superb stuff
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 7:33 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for all your input! I appreciate y'all taking the time to comment on these.

Falldamage: Thanks. You are absolutely right about the perspective. Missed that one. I'll fix it one of these days. Glad you like my pics.

Sumaleth, Glad you like 'em and thanks for your input.

spyroteknik, I dont own nobody Wink Thanks for your comments. I find it really hard to keep a fresh view on my stuff when I've starred at it for to long. So its cool to get critique from a fellow artist.

Max, You hit the bullseye. Smoke is a good idea. Yeah some parts are unfinished. I just couldn't whip myself into finishing it. Nice observation regarding the foreground rocks. I agree.

Anthony, A picture says more than a thousand words, thanks! It just begged to be added.

Heysoos. Kind words. I really dig your painting style, keep it up bro.

del3030. Thanks man.

Misc. thanks. You are making great progress. I dig your recent speedpaint,
scene2d.jpg it looks cool:)
I started in colour. The first one was a pretty straight foreward process. With the second one I played around with a few layes before slapping on the paint.

Kimmy, I'm flattered:)

Taotao, Cheers!

R.A.F. Thanks. And yes smoke is needed.

Again, very cool with the critique, and you all taking the time to post.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 3:27 pm     Reply with quote
The overall detail in the first image is amazing. The mechanical structure in the second is amazing. These are some VERY nice images!
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 6:57 am     Reply with quote
Very nice, did you use any reference btw?
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:51 am     Reply with quote
love it and love your site too!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:29 pm     Reply with quote
Damn! PRINGLE Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
Pringle is Da Man! Love them both!
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 1:57 am     Reply with quote
Thanks Guys!

Godwin, no reference. Which is pretty lame when I'm one click away from google. Just being lazy I guess.

oh, and btw. I've got a website up at:

http://www.pringleart.com/

Still some adjustments to be made. Haven't look at the typography and
need to upload a couple of pics. but all in all its done.

Later,
Pringle
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 10:36 am     Reply with quote
cool stuff man! way to go!
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 11:37 am     Reply with quote
man, that is a spectacular website! I'm glad you made one too, because I've been trying to find all your various speedpaintings I might have missed.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 7:28 pm     Reply with quote
Hejsa Pringle (that's just Hi in danish)

Great stuff both on here and webpage. Would be good fun to see a painting you have spent a lot of time on with lots of details and stuff to look around at as complement to all the great concepts and mood boards. I'm thinking weeks or months hehe.

Was curious about your year in Beijing, China. What was it like and what did you learn most of all from there?
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