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Martin Rebas · Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 4:04 am

A quick sketch for what is supposed to become a realistic fantasy painting with a strong sense of movement. I want harsh critiques, paintovers, ANYTHING that could help me improve the image.

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Herman · Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 8:07 pm

Is she standing on the ground? Because I feel as if she's about to fall backwards onto her butt. I think that if you want her to do like a thrusting motion forward towards the viewer, her leg should be behind her. I'm not exactly sure what it is you are looking for with her pose. I like how the monsters swarm in from the edges of the pic though, very dramatic Smile

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Martin Rebas · Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 7:36 am

Ok, here's a new variant, but I'm not sure it's better.

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Odds · member Member # Joined: 17 Sep 2004 Posts: 374

cool, but not enough colors to hint at form. also, it looks like she's going to slip on her face now :/
i think you're pushing the poses a LITTLE too far. also, work on the monsters... they look sort of surreal and cartoony. keep it up

Sumaleth · Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 4:30 pm

You need overlap between the elements. In this version the characters appear to be carefully placed so as to not overlap each other.
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TemplaStormX · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Apr 2005 Posts: 16

Great view and very action packed. I am looking forward to see more from you.