[R.A.F.]

After a year or so I post again.
I spend too many hours with this one... really, I don't know how many...
About the references? Well she looks pretty much like my ex-girlfriend... but mainly this is a case of repeat an re-do all the time (a good friend of mine is guilty of some of those repetitions� isn�t Julio? . I�m still not happy with the water but honestly I get bored with it....



So, guys: Critics please!
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[insane007]

really well done character. I admit the water isnt up to the level of the rest of the painting, but that would be very high considering how the rest turned out. do you have a high res pic?

[Odds]

personally, i love it. but one thing i'd like to see is a little more color variation in her skin. i mean, she's already hot.. but why not make her hotter?
i'd really like a high-res pic... keep up the good work

[PuC]

I'd like to see a the high resolution version because lots of the detail seems to go lost now, it looks beatiful.

my crits: perspective looks a little bit off on the edge of the axe blade and the armor thing protecting her lower stumach area.
love the skin colours and the lightning though.
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[R.A.F.]

Hi guys.

PuC: Yes I agree on that, I got lots of problems doing the axe blade (maybe all the axe thing) In the first version was a blade... Maybe I have to re-think the whole arms position. The armor thing isn't great too so maybe I have to change that too. Thank's for your freedback.

Odds: I maybe need to balance a little the color skin, or even the whole lighting! After looking the image again (you know taking time after is done) maybe she looks a little out of place... About a hotter version, well I got one... but you need to demostrate to be +18 to see that one. LOL

insane007: First ,thanks. The water looks...wrong... Im a lazy guy what can I say.

To you all, I'm working on those changes.... Then I'm gonna post a bigger image... You guys are right, some details are lost here

Thank's
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[R.A.F.]

Hi again.
Some changes here... reflexions on water, a little more ambient so she looks more "there" an a different perspective for the axe.
And well, the bitmap is bigger



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[del3030]

i absolutley love her face and the expression on it.
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[ElfGirlKimmy]

She really is beautiful. The water is looking much better, too.
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[the_insider]

awesome ...i love the facial expression the most...good anatomy on that btw...About skin variation, I think you should create the effect of the tight clothing around her belly area, lower breast and shoulders. I don't quite know how to explain...you know around the edges when your skin gets indented when you wear tight clothes...not saying you do
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[R.A.F.]

Thank's guys.
I use to spend more time with the faces always, so they use to look better than the rest... mean I got a few pictures with "unfinnished features"... and this one start to be another one.

the_insider: Yes, I have to do that... is just my lazyness...
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