[yangge]

In this stretch of jungle ,
you are last flowers.
Oh, your reticent girl!
Close your deep eye.
God flop wings in there night.
Oh, the health like that statue trembling of yours emerges!
Eyes of you deep,
flop wings inside night.
Your arms are delicate ,
like the flower;
The knee,
like the rose

use-phptpshop and painter
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[ElfGirlKimmy]

This is lovely, I like this piece. Two things that bothered me - I wish her eyes had more depth to them, compared to the details in the rendering of the nose and lips, they seem somewhat flat. Also, the only obvious line you have is on her neck. Maybe a little bit of shading down there to get ride of the line would also help with keeping the depth consistant throughout the piece.

Overall, nice work, she is lovely.
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[yangge]

Thank you for your suggestions,