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Martin Rebas
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Location: G�teborg, Sweden
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 Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2005 8:12 am |
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I want vicious critiques.
1: What part needs the most improvement?
2: Should I keep or ditch the leaf decorations on the sweater?
/Martin
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blackmask
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| Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2005 1:19 pm |
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| Looks good to me. Only thing I can say is that before I read that the leaves were part of the sweater, I assumed that she was holding a branch in her right hand, outside of the painting. |
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doc_fluff
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| Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2005 1:54 pm |
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i'd have to agree with blackmask, i thought that she was holding the leaves as well. the only other thing is her left eye brow...the angle of the brow doesn't match the expression of her face and makes her face look a litlte ackward.
it's great stuff though, dude...
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The Real Mark
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| Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2005 1:39 am |
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The eyes don't seem to line up too well... I dont feel much atmosphere and lighting in the piece... like if you're next to a fire or a fire is behind you your face would be dark. and the fire would almost glow. I guess thats just something to think about... otherwise I think her skin is sexy  haha good work. |
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