[murkku]

Been lurking here far too long , so now that i (sort of) finished this cover for a small Finnish sci-fi magazine (Spin) i thought i would post it here

..they havent replied to my email yet so i dont know if i have to do any changes to it, but im pretty sure there will be only minor changes, if any..

[Affected]

There are anatomy issues... The shoulders look mismatched, like one of them ( her left probably) wasn't quite properly aligned there, and the perspective on the face is a bit odd. Also for a woman she is really buff. Not impossibly so perhaps, but it does raise questions about use of steroids if you know what I mean. And last, use reference for the hands if you didn't already. They could do with being a bit more lifelike.

[murkku]

hey thanks for the crits. I'll try to fix the hands and shoulders, but im not gonna make her less muscular, because shell need them to flap those wings

[deadguy]

Then she needs less bicep, and more pectoral - maybe even an entended breastbone :p

[noxi]

Anatomy issues, smanatomy smissiues. Bah, only if you look with a microscope! I think it�s over all very good. I�d like to see more color tones, but no other crits. Fantastic!

Very nice composition and perspective. Good feeling of action, movement and flying, much due the perspective. That�s the way we�d look at bird flying over us. Good thinking. Congrats.

[the_insider]

yea i kinda like the body and face---nicely rendered...but you seemed in a rush to get to bed by the time you hit the hands(forearms) wings and background...those three sorry to say don't really cut it...that is unless of course youre not done which i hope youre not...overall nice..just don't be in such a hurry...take the time to look at some reference or even your own hands
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