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Oxideyes junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Sep 2004 Posts: 21
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 5:39 pm |
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This started out as an 80's style hardcore albumn cover art. It has evolved so far to this, I'm not sure when I'll call it finished, as I keep messing with it.
![](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v127/rubbermonkey1/mortaltrappings.jpg) _________________ not "smallpox" I said "small box" |
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Oxideyes junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Sep 2004 Posts: 21
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 12:47 am |
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I blew out the mids and will probobly leave it at this.... I included the original just in case anyone wants to see the madness of overworking I tend to Wacom into my work lately.
This is the latest:
This is the original:
![](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v127/rubbermonkey1/mortaltrappingsorig.jpg) _________________ not "smallpox" I said "small box" |
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matter member
Member # Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 82 Location: ny
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 12:57 pm |
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looks sweet, i really like it... strange subject matter, but well-handled the way you've kept it loose.. you can see all the stages it's gone through at once.. i think one suggestion would be to add a few hints of some dramatic color in the darker values of the syringes and mask? to visually connect them, and also to add a little more mood into the piece..
-matt _________________ Sorry! for any digressive, pompous, or just plain off-topic rants. |
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Wagner member
Member # Joined: 11 Feb 2004 Posts: 134 Location: United States
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 6:00 pm |
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I think the value contrasts too much. I'd like the values to be more like in the upper right hand corner.
Looks cool though! _________________ I just realised that my screen name is Wagner, but my last name is Wagner, I'm not making any references to anyone. |
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Niten junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2005 Posts: 5 Location: Helsinki, Finland
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 2:34 pm |
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I think the first one is really cool. Reminds me about the Space marine concepts from the Warhammer 40,000. But something is really missing... I think you should add some more lights and shadows. Background could help.. |
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