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Oxideyes
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 5:39 pm     Reply with quote
This started out as an 80's style hardcore albumn cover art. It has evolved so far to this, I'm not sure when I'll call it finished, as I keep messing with it.


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 12:47 am     Reply with quote
I blew out the mids and will probobly leave it at this.... I included the original just in case anyone wants to see the madness of overworking I tend to Wacom into my work lately.

This is the latest:




This is the original:

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 12:57 pm     Reply with quote
looks sweet, i really like it... strange subject matter, but well-handled the way you've kept it loose.. you can see all the stages it's gone through at once.. i think one suggestion would be to add a few hints of some dramatic color in the darker values of the syringes and mask? to visually connect them, and also to add a little more mood into the piece..

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 6:00 pm     Reply with quote
I think the value contrasts too much. I'd like the values to be more like in the upper right hand corner.

Looks cool though!
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Niten
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 2:34 pm     Reply with quote
I think the first one is really cool. Reminds me about the Space marine concepts from the Warhammer 40,000. But something is really missing... I think you should add some more lights and shadows. Background could help..
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