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momcake
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Hey guys i'm new here but i joyfully watched the work you guys cranked out in this forums before. This is the latest artwork I did 1-2 months ago. I would be happy if you have some tips for me. I posted this on several other pages and received some nice tips to finish this. (Sorry for my english  )
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abandon
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 6:53 am |
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blackmask
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 12:23 pm |
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| I think it looks very nice, just a couple of things... the club looks a little flat and his right hand (the one on the rock) looks weird, I'm pretty sure it's because his thumb is flat and facing straight up like his fingers when perhaps it should be at more of an angle like it is on his other hand. Oh and maybe make the back of his right hand more pronounced.. it kind of looks like his fingers are separate all the way to his wrist. Anyways, excellent work. |
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Odds
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 3:00 pm |
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I like it! But, I agree with blackmask about the rock looking a little funny. Fix that up and it'll be awesome. 
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momcake
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| Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 6:29 am |
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Thx for this critic. I must agree the right hand looks kind of weird. I invested so much time for the hand looking good but it still sux hands are still a subject to me which i can't manage properly but i'll try to fix it.
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