Lombi member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Posts: 71 Location: Slovenia, EU
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 4:16 pm |
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(http://www.lombergar.com/portfolio/279)
How shall my animal
Whose wizard shape I trace in the cavernous skull,
Vessel of abscesses and exultation's shell,
Endure burial under the spelling wall,
The invoked, shrouding veil at the cap of the face,
Who should be furious,
Drunk as a vineyard snail, flailed like an octopus,
Roaring, crawling, quarrel
With the outside weathers,
The natural circle of the discovered skies
Draw down to its weird eyes?
Sigh long, clay cold, lie shorn,
Cast high, stunned on gilled stone; sly scissors ground in frost
Clack through the thicket of strength, love hewn in pillars drops
With carved bird, saint, and suns the wrackspiked maiden mouth
Lops, as a bush plumed with flames, the rant of the fierce eye,
Clips short the gesture of breath.
Die in red feathers when the flying heaven's cut,
And roll with the knocked earth:
Lie dry, rest robbed, my beast.
You have kicked from a dark den, leaped up the whinnying light,
And dug your grave in my breast. _________________ Looking for surreal art prints or some surreal art? |
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Affected member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 1854 Location: Helsinki, Finland
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:33 pm |
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I'm left wondering, why does she cover her breast? Her pose otherwise seems very self-assured, but the hand on her chest is more of a self-conscious gesture. If it doesn't have a purpose, I think that hand should go. |
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