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Rogosh
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:51 pm     Reply with quote
this is an illustration for a poster for a local church's last christmas choir concert. I posted a rough of this in the speed painting thread. The original resolution is 7200 x 10800 (24" x 36"). Comments/Crits are welcome.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 5:16 pm     Reply with quote
thought I should return the favour Smile
I like the lighting on the face and the overall composition
his left foot looks a bit small to me, and the box seem to pop out in front of everything else.. maybe cause it's close to being a comp. color to the background? Also, some gradually darker shading on his body might give the picture some more drama.. and finally, the box is quite aligned with his left leg, giving the picture a somewhat stiff impression maybe
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