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maple0425
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 8:08 pm     Reply with quote






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maple0425
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:41 am     Reply with quote


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 12:21 pm     Reply with quote
that's a really spiffy effect you got there Shocked
... any hints on how you do that????

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 12:31 pm     Reply with quote
I love the visuals, great effects.

The typo needs work. This font isn't the best choice to go with it takes away from the pics because it draws to much attention. With a better font and layout this could be 2x better. Some spelling problems here and there. Try to be consistent, sometimes you use 'u' instead of 'you'? I'd go for thinner font to take up less space and attention.

Also never go with default photoshop text makeup... think about the placement and spacing of your lettering. A more dynamic placement would go better with the feel of the pics.
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